FreshFleshFreak

Hi,
I've already tried to write a few songs but it a little hard for me to find a good riff or the rigth chord alignement.
The moment I find something that sounds good I start to find it to easy,cheap,normal etc.
That my problem.
Please post any suggestions or thoughts!

Simple song I just recorded on a simple day.It's still missing some lyrics and twists but this is the Role model

Spoken:
Well I'm just gonna tell you a story
About one of those lonely days
Were I just don't know where
And who I am!

Usually I get these days on a
Rainy sunday afternoon when
I'm just sitting around
playing,thinking

My mind doesn't always make sense
But sometimes it does but
these are't one of them

Verse:
And I go outside and look what the
world has left.

I go down to the water
sit on a stone
wait for something but not me

I see grey hard stone,
sand on the beach
on a tree,an apple red!

The sun goes down
- the moon
he talks to me

Chorus: 2x
He says: "Who are you to question the open seas?"

Verse:
My mind is opened by a crack
light destroys what I know

Chorus:
I've known so many things
I knew about the world and its dreams

I've known so many things
I heard about the people eho still do

Verse: (Point of the song!)
Love red,Live life
of dreams,hope,happiness
and go!
The long way home!